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life may not be relevent to the way we view it
circumstances may decide to foreclose
on our dimly lit circle of knowledge
and instead of allowing us to openly admit
to the addiction of self--
we may indeed become the newest victim to
an insurgency of plasticity
a model of the perfectly hidden self
by way of modern invention, a self-proclaimed
necessity of downfall,
approached by the weak in mind
and weaker in spirit, the martyred and the silenced
beaten down by the electric success and golden luck
in the gilded cages surrounding a false utopia
erected in order to fulfill a substantial lack of competance

this altered state of mind is
a weapon of biological proportions
a shadowed figure, rising up to power
to utterly destroy any trace of the original human life
and a sense of pride in a complete state of mind
unaffected by moral disillusionment
and mental corruption, a dictator to the human condition
and it's generational effects

the years of change have slowly adapted
to this influence, molding to the interference of expectation
and renewed through negative affirmation on the subject
by phony professionals educated to wean truth
and charge a bill for anything resembling it
this secret has brought us to a point of near devestation
teetering on the narrow edge between dawn and destruction
hiding it by exposing only the shadow of it's agents
masquerading as a savior in times of trial
in eloquence they connect fable and create a rendition
of failure that far outweighs it's true counter
instilling a morbid duty to do whatever it takes
to fall to this screaming opposition

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:iconmrghostman:
Absolutely absolute. Very nicely put. You have a way with words girl.
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~sometimes2 Oct 3, 2008  Student
awwww :hug: thank you!!
lol the way i came about it was strange :) i was just writing whatever words came to my head, and all of a sudden, there it was! :)

i'm glad you enjoyed it
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~thedreamersmovement Oct 2, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
Love it my dear!!! Love you!!!!

I think these are some of my favorite lines:

and instead of allowing us to openly admit
to the addiction of self--
we may indeed become the newest victim to
an insurgency of plasticity
a model of the perfectly hidden self

and these too:

masquerading as a savior in times of trial
in eloquence they connect fable and create a rendition
of failure that far outweighs it's true counter
instilling a morbid duty to do whatever it takes
to fall to this screaming opposition
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:iconsometimes2:
Mood: Love ~sometimes2 Oct 3, 2008  Student
thank you darling :)
i'm glad you like it! lol

Loooooove you! :hug:
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:iconthedreamersmovement:
~thedreamersmovement Oct 3, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
You are welcome my dear!!!

LOOOOOOOOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!|:hug:
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